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Comments for 'Fallen Angel: Part 6: Hunters'



VALO
12:47 pm | February 12, 2003
ALLRIGHT STORY wHY THE SAD ENDING?
gruntkiller
7:32 pm | February 11, 2003
im just setting things up. what would be the fun of it if the good guys won, well at least at this point in the series
gruntkiller
9:04 pm | February 8, 2003
thanks the next chapter is finished i just gotta edit it then ill send it in
Bean
6:04 pm | February 8, 2003
listening to halo music right now,your story was badass!
gruntkiller
7:29 pm | February 6, 2003
thanks!! the next one will be a sorta "calm before the storm" just to make sure that everythingg goes together right before the real action begins
Wado
7:21 pm | February 6, 2003
Yes, excellent job.

Of course there were very few errors that I found, one I found was a "Theirs" that should have been "There's". Nothing to really worry about.

I need to find some time to keep up with this series. Excellent work.
el_halo_diablo
12:40 pm | February 6, 2003
That was really great, and I see this time you amde sure there was no confusion between the metal and plasma swords. This is one of my favorite series right now.


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