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Comments for 'The Seeping: Tales of 2 Pilots Pt. 2'



Alpha Lance
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Please start a new paragraph when someone get done
talking,8/10.
'Nosolee
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
That was really good! I can't wait for what's to come. And yeah, use the indent to create a new paragraph each time someone new begins to talk, it just makes the story more enjoyable. otherwise: 10/10


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