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Comments for '(Prologue) M31: First Blood'



Wes
11:27 am | August 1, 2003
The new installments have encounters with aliens. (They're not Covenant, but the situation is bad.)
Wes
1:32 am | August 1, 2003
Actually, I started this, trying to write my version of the first encounter with the Covenant. I changed it around to make it more original, not something built off of Bungie. I suppose it could still apply, with different dates and stuff of that sort.
Jinkaiden
11:29 am | July 31, 2003
I have to agree with Steele. I understand it's a prologue, but putting it in order will help. I love the mess you put Earth in, but somehow the US and UK obliterating the rest of the world to become the super powers of Earth seemed creepy.

However, I was hoping it would have more to do with Halo. You know, a re-encounter with the Covenant or something. It's not my story, but it would help.

Jinkaiden
Wes Foutch
12:45 am | May 7, 2003
Reply to Steele:
Thanks for the comment, I have re-edited the Prologue due to it. As the author, I completely understood what was going on, and didn't think about it from the reader's point of veiw.
Technically, this has nothing to do with Halo, but we got the start of an idea from Halo. I posted it here, because of the inspiration from Halo, and because I think it will appeal to the same types of readers.

Reply to scope:
The carnage is coming! Be patient!
Steele
9:54 pm | May 5, 2003
Hmmm...*purses lips, thoughtfully,* Not sure what to make of it. I think that this has nothing to do with Halo, am I correct? Not a bad script, really, just needs to be put in order. You jumped around from 2830 to 1930 then to 2560 then to 2430 then back to 2900. Just put it in some bloody order! But otherwise pretty good.
scope
9:36 pm | May 5, 2003
8/10 I want to see some carnage
Masta Chef
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Great writing, I'm doing my own story right now and I know how tough it is. But I love the writing, well done. Whens the action though?


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