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Comments for 'The Shadows - Part 4: Preparing for Reach'



el_halo_diablo
10:06 pm | September 10, 2002
well I scanned this baby real fast with my eyes, and as you noted, it has no action. oh well, now that I have the picture in my mind, I'm ready for action, keep on writing.
Wado
5:15 pm | September 10, 2002
Not too bad. I don't know about leaving marines out on front like that. Marines are better at attacking. I would have wanted to keep them under cover (e.g. underground) until the action started, then send them out on a counter-attack.

Keep up the writing. Looking forward to a big battle.


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