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Comments for 'Escaping the Autumn' |
Gauge115
7:05 pm | March 20, 2003
Hey nice, but the orders seemed pretty long--I think maybe the marines would use more jargon in their speech, but good job on providing a vivid atmosphere. Reminds me of when the MC makes his grand escape.
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Mr. Bill
9:09 am | March 16, 2003
Steele: No Jackals that you ever see, but they're there. Trust me.
Rough, but good. Back to the classics, I like. And very little MC, which I also like. And no 'to be continued' which I like. Nice tittle, no part numbers, which I like. Just a little rough. Oh yah, you managed to almost completely avoid my ONE pet peeve: You wrote numbers correctly, (two instead of 2). I thank you.
I'd like to read your next work.
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Steele
12:54 pm | March 14, 2003
Good story although there were no Jackals on the Pillar of Autumn at any point in time. I don't know why but there wasn't. I like
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Steele
12:54 pm | March 14, 2003
Good story although there were no Jackals on the Pillar of Autumn at any point in time. I don't know why but there wasn't. I like
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The Cold Critic
12:42 pm | March 14, 2003
You really should be able to think of a more original idea!
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The Cold Critic
12:42 pm | March 14, 2003
You really should be able to think of a more original idea!
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