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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: Rodriguez's Gifts'



Ajax
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Liked this one, keep it up man. That modded pistol sounds baddass. You should get something good going with Rodriquez, Me gusta mucho la chica, no?
CovieKilla
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Great Story...a little short but good. In the next chapter you better include Peters not being used to the side arm much, and slowly adjusting to it...not like automatically he picked it up and worked wonders with it.
Yeti
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
let me guess the story... the covie frigate has been either sent to glass the planet (because of the flood) or has been captured by the flood. i hope that it is the frst one. Hang on... how did the flood get off the Halo??? maybe the covies found another but the flood stole a ship or hid on one? bad news.... cool pistol though.
Anonymous
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
im with ajax
Myth
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
wait, would Rodriques hook up with Peters or Karls? just wondering, great stuff, write again soon
Myth
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
one more thing, whats Rodriques' first name?
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
does she need one?
Bean
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
looks like it's time to test out those new guns on live targets!
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
rodriguez, i mean. does she need a first name?
Da Mann
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Names for R.: Yolanda
Carla
Lolita
Sarah
etc.

Great story. They should make it into an action movie; it's got guns, women and I'm expecting fast cars somewhere later.
FOrunnER
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
nice story dude, but why would peters need to now haw to use the new weapons (as implied by Aristole)
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Uhh.... 5 bullets taking out an Elite's shields? And these are supposed to be ADVANCED bullets? Sounds more like pellets of catfood jammed into a gun barrel man.

The Pistol is cooler though, and the chapter wasnt bad, overall it was just sort of strange.
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I reread it and here are a few things about it that were a little strange:

The AI is extremely weird, the story moved into a whole new setting without alot of detail, And Rodrequez seemed like she was almost stalking Peters, using the uniform thin as an excuse to see him naked. Just some little things...
MA5B
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
She wants him, thats why shes all over him. What if her name were Shaniqua...
Myth
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Yolanda, huh?
Nazgul
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
thinking more like: Katie, Tia, Brittany i dunno I'm not too good at this stuff
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
sarah... or rachel... hrmm
Bean
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
just comin to take a look,and there's nothing good just guys fantasizing ;P
Silent Death Sorrow
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Hey GLADIATRRR3000,
It's me. The reason I havent been on is cause i have a cable modem, and my cable was shut off! Im not at my house, and so i cant write. I will get on as soom as possible at my home, and write pt. 2 of Trace117. P.S. Good story, 10/10
DUDE
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Dont give her a first name. The beauty in reading is imigination. If given to much info, in this case a first name, everyone will put a face to someone they know with that name.
She is hot as it is. Peters should definitely tap that ass........in a manner of speaking. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Yeti
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
whens the next one gonna be cause this is definetly the best series in Bungie.org
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
im sick, and im on vacation, AND my computer has a virus, so it wont be up for a while. cross your fingers.
and thanks.
rogue_spartan
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
hey if your sick thats all the more reason to keep writing you should have all of the free time in the world right now.
dont tell rodriques's first name im with the horny as hell dude.
yes I do mean you DUDE.
One_Shot_One_Kill
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
A bit short, but your seris is awsome except when they are skiing on pecies of a Banshee. 9.5/10
One_Shot_One_Kill
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Elfster, your a stupid saying that the pistol's bullets arnt advanced because it takes 5 rounds to take out a sheild. unless you always play on easy, not legendary, 5 bullets would be too much. Why dont you try playing Legendary for once.


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