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Comments for 'CORRUPT: EndgamE'



Sergeant B
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Cool. 9.9/10!
Mainevent
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Damn that 559, damn him to a spartany hell.
Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I agree with Mainevent. First I want 559 to be castrated, then stripped of 50% of his muscle mass, then stripped of his steel bone grafting, then maked him eat his balls and spend the rest of his days as a greeter at Golden Corral. The Ultimate Punishment! Muahahahahaha!
Mainevent
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I was with you until the Golden Corral, that place is good. Well, if you go to the right ones.
Sergeant B
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Walker, I think your "punishment" is alittle too much for "559". I do agree that he should get punishment, but eating his own balls are sickening. Overwhelming again....................
Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
The balls part was specifically reserved for pedophiles until I read this.
Sim McGaulkin
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
nice action-y writing
but well, I did not get the story.
and the balls are just too much.
What is he fighting?
JCDenton
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
wow this story kicked a$$ man! I completely followed it all the time. great job! 9.9/10
Alpha Lance
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Love it, and I also loved that nice twist at the end.
Bean
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
nicely done!


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