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Bold
8:36 am | June 11, 2004
[b]BOLD[b]
Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
This is the best one yet.
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
LOL!!

I read the first few lines and had to stop reading to post a comment.

farter and farter away? LOL
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Ok, im done reading it. But I guess 778 had a sex change, because last I remember 778 was a girl lol.
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
where did it say she was a guy?
Kancer
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
hEY, IT WAS WESOME. i DON'T REMEMBER IT SAYING THAT 778 WAS A GUY. hEY MAN, FAVORITE PART WAS WHERE HE SQUEEZED THAT GUYS HEAD, DAMN THAT WOULD BE NASTY. kEEP 'EM COMING, THOUGH CAUSE THERE GREAT.
Anonymous
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
'He looked onto a small screen and saw 778 on HIS motorcycle slowly coming towards the armor'.


thatz where it was on the last line. everything else is kool as man. 10/10
crashedwarthog
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
that was me
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Yup... HIIISSSS motorcycle. H I S motorcycle lol.
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
that's 559's motorcycle. not her's. so i said she was on his motorcycle, meaning 559's motorcycle
Alpha Lance
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
How do you make bold letters and itisese on the
internet?And sweet story,9/10.
Alpha Lance
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Never mind about the bold, and itileseing thing.
crashedwarthog
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
oh i get it now lol sorry m8, howz the "a marine named peters'" series comin along?
crashedwarthog
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
oh i get it now lol sorry m8, howz the "a marine named peters'" series comin along?


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