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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: From One Crash To Another'



Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Very good, the only problem: "That's what tha Army pays us for" the Army doesn't pay Marinesn the Marine Corps pays Marines. Other than that 10/10
Kaboose
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
That was really funny...especially the part where Peters was shot in the foot and he shot the guy back...and when they were wrestling and what the hell...it was perfect! 10/10
pj-NYkr90
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
i smell a full fledged battle coming up. 10/10 But getting shot in the foot isn't very fun. I feel for him man.
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Hahahahaha. And thats coming from someone that thinks when you're recuited you get to pick your position? Ohwell, it was cool, but shooting other people in the foot just makes everything worse.

9.3/10
Bean
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
lol that's some funny shit
Khyber
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
you shoulda had peters disect that elite... that woulda been cool.
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
but then the scene would have been longer than it is
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
and it was already too long
Khyber
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
we can always wish for more gore, though...
Alpha Lance
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Gore is great,and the most gore I ever seen is on
"Saving Privet Ryan."BTW,that was some funny SHIT.
10/10
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
i like slipping in subtle humor
Jamie
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Wow, Max. Didn't know you had it in you! All of them are really good! Some of the best fics I've read in a while. They're hilarious. Keep writing!
chuck Sherman
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Youre stuff is good, but you don't actually get paid in the army, do you?






P.S. You suck ass castro
Alpha Lance
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Hell yeah you get paid.Because it is a 20 year
career.And you can retire in 20 years.


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