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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: Sledding is Fun, Unless the Covenant Are Behind You'



Da Mann
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Hmm, very nice. The sledding part was uber-cool, but how Peters survived the jump and the Elites didn't I believe can only be explained in film, James Bond style.
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I agree, easily the best chapter yet, but the sledding could have been cooler, like a ghost caught up with him and tried to run him over but he ducks and the ghost goes on the other side of him and hits a tree or something.
10/10
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
hmmmm. i dont like the name i came up with
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
do people still like peters? or did he get old?
pj-NYkr90
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
It's Okay, 9/10. Peter's is still cool, ya just need to make your writings loonger, a lot longer. And more action too. But there's just one last thing that I need to get off my mind. KARLS!!! MADISON!!! NOOOOOO!!!
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
ok. longer. gotcha. they are staying, too. at least for the time being. (one of them is named after me. guess which one) next one wont be for awhile, since im busy and it needs to be long
Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Yeah, I love this series and my favorite character is Karls so please don't let him die!

10/10
Khyber
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
simple: 10/10
Hawk7886
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Very good story! Very funny.

My favorite part was:

"Yeah, right." Peters laughed. "Like I would ever be big enough to assassinate. Lets head for the lights."


"Is the hunter-killer team ready?"

Minor errors, but the humor made up for them.
Much fun,
10/10
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
hey,Vege7a, Karls is going to stay a while. He's the one named after me, so he's a main character thats never there.
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
i just finsihed the next peters.
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
GODDAMN IT! SOMEONE SAY THEY CARE!
crashedwarthog
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
hey gladiator, i care hehe. kewl cant wait 4 the story page 2 be updated:) anyway this was top work! 10/10
Bean
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
lol i care
Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I'm glad Karls is staying.


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