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DaMann
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Excellent! Rebel Spartans. I believe this would make an excellent sequel to Agent Shade's Project Shadow Spartan. Maybe two of the rebel Spartans had managed to escape Josh's wrath and are now in your story.
Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
these guys remind me of terrorists... they make me sick. i wanna see the Master Chief pound their skulls into dust!
TheRambler
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Good Job all around, Indents?
Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Yeah, it's pretty cool but I would also like to see MC kick those guys asses.
Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Yeah, it's pretty cool, but I'd also like for MC to kill 559 and 778, hopefully very violently and painfully.
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Cool but what were they looking for?

Their job is much to easy whatever it is. The first chapter was exciting but now its just super spartans kicking ass that never die. And thats a little boring.

8/10
scope
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
9/10 Good very good
Ishkabibbl
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Are they wearing their armor? If so how could a bike hold up at least 6 tons?
Bean
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
good job on the blood and guts
Guy.
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
1/10...

Super invincible Spartans? Please..
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
now, who are you?
unknown
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Gory, a little sickening, but nothing worse than what i've done on my video games. I bet that room looks like the Pelican on a Marine named Peters.
Otherwise cool.


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