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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: Snow Day'



GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
im going to be doing less peters stories because of my new series 'CORRUPT', so dont expect a new one for awhile
Tango709
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
good but short. did they bandage up peter's arm or what? did the pole only slightly pierce his arm? or was it a skinny pole? i don't get it.
Spartan 117
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
i liked the others better, this one was good tho.
Khyber
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
i liked the gore... reminds me of something out of a steven king book.
Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
not the best one yet, but good nonetheless. what's "Corrupt" about?
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
oh, i did forget to say what happened to the arm, didnt i?
i wasnt really interested in this part of the story because i was working on CORRUPT, so it does have errors looking back on it. If you liked the gore, i think CORRUPT will tickle your fancy
Vege7a
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Yeah, very cool.
scope
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
8.5/10 What happended to his arm?
Hunter_Killer
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Hmm... Almost as short as mine. =| Anyways, 9/10. SNOW DAY!!!! YAY!!!! =D
SiLenT_WaRrioR
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I like the stories, I read them all. I think you should definitely keep up with this series. It would be cool if it eventually tied into part of the Halo plotline, assault on the control tower or something. Well, I'm out. Peace bro.
JCDenton
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
nice... 8.7/10
JCDenton
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
and ALLWAYS keep focussed on your story, I offer up 5 of the 12 hours each day brainstorming, and, you better dont begin more story's than one... you can mix it all up and then both story's would be a failure.
Khyber
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
jeeze... when i write stories i just start writing and the story comes to me as i go along
HUnterKiller
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Great!


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