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Comments for 'memories(part 1) the corrected version'

Dave Luck
10:51 pm | July 15, 2004
I read the title... and laughed.

How come nobody bothers to use the code?
4:44 am | July 14, 2004
hell yeah i need help with ranking and stuff. don't get me wrong,i love the military but i don't understand some of that stuff,if y'all want to really talk about this stuff,my AIM sn is warbrittpaintbal

my chapter on bungie.net is called shielded warriors,so if u wanna check that out too,go ahead,i appreciate y'all,thanks.
8:36 pm | July 13, 2004
If you need help with military stuff, holla at me and russ, we got ya back.

ODST Lead the Way
8:06 pm | July 13, 2004
got it,i'm thankful for your help and very thankful for the fact that you liked it. I'm still getting this code thing down. Oh,and that pelican thing,I'll get that worked out too. Thanks for the Colonel advice too, I have ranking issues,lol. Read my new submission part 2 coming out soon.
5:45 pm | July 13, 2004
Corrected version? Do it one more time with the code and this would actually be better then most.

[indent] for indenting paragraphs and dialogue. Place immeadiately before your parapgraph or dialogue, no spaces at all. Then when you preview your submission, it will look just like a indented paragraph.
2:26 pm | July 13, 2004
That was good actually really good. But you need to use the code. That way u have indents and the such. Second, colonel's don't lead platoons. You didn't say it but so you know Pelicans only hold 10 Marines. So a platoon of 40 would need 4 Pelicans.