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Comments for 'Calling(1)'

javier fernandez-vina
1:08 pm | October 16, 2003
I like it.Many series start out in the middle of a firefigth, but yours starts out as the main character is a civilian.Good.
3:47 am | October 16, 2003
Actually it was directly from minority report almost, but good nonetheless. I cant wait to hear more dude!
7:42 pm | October 15, 2003
i felt that it was somewhat rushed***

small spelling error
6:50 pm | October 15, 2003
it was good, but i felt that i was somewhat rushed...he's at breakfest, then suddenly, he's in a cot...i liked that part, changing his identity...reminded me of Minority Report...keep it up 9/10