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Comments for 'The monitor's contest, part 1'



Guy French
12:21 am | October 2, 2002
yeah potato flood if u just love to laugh at people, then someone should ban him
TrueNike
8:02 pm | July 7, 2002
Arch...because Patato Flood's a horse's ass.
Archangels Blade
11:27 am | July 2, 2002
Thanks, Commie. It's probably true, too. Man, why the hell can't he ever act like a decent HALO lover?
Dirty Commie
9:48 pm | June 25, 2002
Archangel, that Potato Flood comment was right on. Story? What story? Oh, right. Sweet idea, the writing is a little confusing and stuff, but its a good story so far so who cares
Spartan III
6:57 am | June 22, 2002
First off, this is the most... creative idea I've ever scene. It is completely original. Once you smooth off the rough edges, and have the different races a little more, "agressive", this could be a great story. P.S. The monitor is so crazy, he would make something like a contest!
me
6:54 am | June 22, 2002
its cool keep it up/\\_/\\
Knightmare Wolf
2:38 am | June 20, 2002
Creative stoy... What was up with those big.. robot spartan things? I'm having some trouble understanding the story,work on the grammar a bit. Nice idea, but those sides are supposed to be killing eachother? Nevemind, you've got a good idea going! Keep it up!
TrueNike
10:23 pm | June 16, 2002
Ya, Patato Flud, ya a** hole. Put ya money where ya mouth is. It's creative, allthough the story can be worked on and it's a little strange. No offense, though
Anonymous
4:28 pm | June 16, 2002
1:44pm |June 16,2002, sorry for the negative comments that I posted,still, you could work on your storyline a little...and Patato flood,lay off him,the story is pretty creative!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Archangels Blade
11:44 am | June 16, 2002
Potato Flood, you are always so negative, man. I suggest to you to try writing something yourself. It may be bad at some points, but it's probably better than whatever you could come up with. You'd probably write something that runs along the lines of: Pussy cunt fart, pansy ass f***erhead. S***balls motherf***er, asswipe!
Potato Flood
11:20 am | June 16, 2002
......This is the biggest bullsh** I ever saw..
Anonymous
2:33 am | June 16, 2002
12:00 am|June 15,2002Did MC actually walk up to a covie elite,bullshit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
2:33 am | June 16, 2002
11:48 pm| June 15 2002Why the hell did you just talk to an Elite,and a flood! Damnit son!
Jaywhit10
12:21 am | June 15, 2002
Theres some things that need working on. 1. Its reclaimer not retriever. 2. i'm having trouble telling who's talking and whose not. In all nice story, keep it up
Spartan415
8:09 pm | June 14, 2002
your getting a good story going but like archangel said work on the storyline, more details.
Archangels Blade
2:58 pm | June 14, 2002
How's this 'contest' supposed to work? I mean, if they're battling 343 Guilty Spark and his minions, what do you mean when you say that the Flood, Covenant, or Humans could win? You really need to work on your storyline, man! However, the idea behind it is pretty creative!


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