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Comments for 'After Reach Part 1' |
Matt
5:01 pm | February 19, 2003
From the story I can tell you have no idea how the chain of command works, buts thats ok because it is a common problem w/fan fics, the rank of Master Cheif is an elisted rank and anyone w/an enlisted rank always salutes officers not the other way around. Great story though
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Vero
12:42 pm | December 5, 2002
You should really try and make paragraphs for each person talking. You know, put sone space in between people talking. Got kinda confusing after awhile. Maybe you should eleborate more on the story in part two. Keep it up though.
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Gasmask
8:28 pm | December 4, 2002
Weird. You really need to look in an English book once in a while. Completely ruin the reading experience.
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