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Comments for 'Take Back Phoenix'



Nick Kang
12:32 pm | May 16, 2004
Eh...it was okay. The tenses kept on switching and there were a bunch of spelling errors...and a Hunter doesn't go down with one shot to the neck...even on Easy. The plot was pretty good and it lacked description in some places.

NK


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