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Comments for 'Halo: Apocalyptic wars Chapter 2 The truth'



Disciple75
4:30 am | November 11, 2002
Hey, Flood impalor, great story!! It doesnt matter if Longswords were used in the FoR book as fighters and bombers. This is fiction, not real life. This is part of the imagination of a talented writer!! If he wants the Chief and Marines riding a cloud to the Truth and Reconciliation 2 then let it be beautiful!! Ha....look forward to more!!!
Arthur Wellesley
6:33 pm | November 9, 2002
Perhaps they can hover, but have you ever seen a Harrier Jumpjet being used like a dropship?
Wado
8:44 pm | November 8, 2002
Anonymous was me, forgot to put my name. When I have more time I'll try to catch up on reading all the stories... sorry, been too busy.
Anonymous
8:33 pm | November 8, 2002
Err... Sorry didn't read the story, but Arthur, I think Longswords can hoover, they are capable of vertical takeoff and technology does allow for anti-gravity. I think the only reason not to use Longswords would be that they would be very expensive dropships. For a very important mission, however, cost is not an option, heck use the POA as a drop ship, crash it on some land. (Hey where's the shield ships?). Just my opinion.
Arthur Wellesley
7:56 pm | November 8, 2002
There is a reason there are Pelican dropships and Longsword fighters, Flood Impaler. Pelicans sacfrice speed for the ability to hover and thus drop people off, thus the name. Long swords are really fast and have a large arsenal, but do not hover. In effect, Long Swords are the equivalent of planes and Pelicans are the equivalent of helicopters. So unless the Long Swords are supposed to use paratroopers, Pelicans will be dropships. Also only larger warships can use MAC guns.Otherwise, excellent story except for the mistakes, I look forward to more.
Flood impalor
9:42 pm | November 6, 2002
Ya know Vaeyate, I used friggen longsword fighters as dropships, because they are faster, more manouverable etc. In tight spots, The fightercan easyly take out a couple of pursuing enemy fighters. Plus, if you are dropping reenforcements at the sametime as an enemy, the mac guns plus homing missiles can neutralize enemydropships. So use your imagination.And i will bet you like Gundam wing, Dont you?
Flood impalor
9:40 pm | November 6, 2002
Ya know, Longsword fighters replace pelicans in my story, so take it or leave it.And I have forgotten about something....This series would not have been possible without the help of a good friend of mine...LETS HEAR IT FOR..... GRUNTKILLER!!!!!!!
gruntkiller
7:02 pm | November 6, 2002
great work but theres a few mistakes, for the readers sake every time a new charecter speaks make a new paragraph it makes the story less confusing and easier to follow, great work and long live Canada
Vayeate
4:57 pm | November 6, 2002
I have seen this mistake so many times. You must have read the book because of you otherly great story but a Long sword is NOT a drop ship. Long swords are intercepters. i may be wrong. there may be other types of long swords that were not in the book. but the only type of long sword i know is a long sword intercepter. just for your knowlage, the drop ship is called a Pelican.


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