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Comments for 'Halo: Apocalyptic wars Chapter 1 The Truth of war: friends and foes'



Swift Death
3:36 pm | September 23, 2003
IS ANYBODY OUT THERE???????????
Swift Death
3:34 pm | September 23, 2003
yoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoyo have any of you ever played Starcraft?
Bruce
8:41 pm | November 11, 2002
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Bruce
8:39 pm | November 11, 2002
I agree with knightmare about the pistol. Even though Prima's official stratgy guide says that they are ineffective against elites, I think that they rule against them. They are MUCH,/b> more effective against against them than the AR.
Bruce
11:12 pm | November 8, 2002
I was wondering when this guy would write a fan fic. lol nice job man
Knightmare(MM
2:21 am | November 8, 2002
PISTOL bullets ARE NOT CRAPPY. They can take down a banshee and they HURT LIKE HELL.
Sarge
2:15 am | November 8, 2002
Gore, violence, and mauling I'm in. Keep working on some of the finer points.
Flood impalor
10:18 pm | November 5, 2002
Anybody who wondered about the M-90 assault rifle, I have a little sample. You see, this is most advanced weapon ever created by the UNSC forces. It fires a thirty round clip of PISTOL bullets... Sounds crapy eh? so anyway, after the bullet is fired, it travels about 8900 feet per second. That is not all, of course. It has a nice scope that can swap between thermal vision mode, or night vision mode. This weapon is dead acurate, so dont under estemate it. The bullets have a small explosive charge in them, when they hit a target, they have a small discharge. quite effective againts mechanicle units like sentinels(not like the unsc knows about them-yet). It also has higgh anti energy shield capabilities. It can be fitted with a silencer. For close combat, it has a fitted beyonet.......
Flood impalor
9:58 pm | November 5, 2002
To all readers (if any)This is the boring crap. around chapter 3, their will be intense combat. so any people who are sensitive about gore, violence, and maulery, please dont read chapter 3. And ya, any one who plays halo hear wont be that sensitive. So maggots who dislike gore- STAY AWAY FROM THE REST OF MY SERIES
Flood impalor
9:58 pm | November 5, 2002
Ya know, i did not give it away. i am simply stating that they die. i sent in the bad version of chapter1, and i needed to get rid of some characters, ''SARGE''
Sarge
9:49 pm | November 5, 2002
Nice reveal your chapter no need to read it now...
Flood impalor
9:45 pm | November 5, 2002
Dont worry about it grunt killer. it is only a crappy start ya know.Plus, i could use the help.i have already sent in chapter 2, so get ready for some action. But Lt henney and lt ferrente die a greusome death. have you spotted the easter eggs yet?
gruntkiller
7:09 pm | November 5, 2002
realy good could had a few small problems(every time a person speaks its a new paregraph) byt realy good please don't kill me off (you do realise you put me in their)
Flood impalor
3:08 pm | November 5, 2002
Ya, but in chapter 2 you will be explained a little bit more of whats going on.......
Disciple75
6:33 am | November 5, 2002
Man alive....that was interesting! Are you going to expand on whow was aboard the Truth and Reconciliation? I don't mean to sound dum but, whom is it? Anyways, great wrighting I look forward to more reading!!! Would be a good twist to make the reader wonder...cool.
Flood impalor
4:09 am | November 5, 2002
SO....What does anybody think? it is only a starter. I think i might remove several characters. Some may die, i dont know.


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