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Comments for 'Jera III'



A.P.N JJiggssaw
12:31 pm | March 23, 2004
What???! Not going to come back or not going to read the good fan fics? Or both? Godammit the last thing I need in my life is another puzzle-even my name is JJiggssaw [stifled sobs]. Where's my special blanky...
SOS.Odin
10:32 pm | March 22, 2004
hahahahaha
thats the attitude EVERYONE needs
ahhahahaha
Elizar
5:37 pm | March 22, 2004
Actually, I am not going to.
A.P.N JJiggssaw
1:09 pm | March 22, 2004
Ok....ok....keep trying. read the halo books and then many, many fan fiction stories. Look for CoLd BlooDed, Sage Scorpion, Styr...stirfrye...(whatever that guy's name is), Hunter_Killer, or anyone else anyone mentions. Come bak and give it another shot, and who knows.
Thomas Harper
11:24 pm | March 21, 2004
there is ALOT of room for improvment lets just put it that way.
SOS.Odin
11:08 pm | March 21, 2004
well i guess im not gonna read this one
CoLd BlooDed
10:20 pm | March 21, 2004
Ouch...
Helljumper
7:59 pm | March 21, 2004
I second that
Berconius
6:38 pm | March 21, 2004
Agreed.
The Collector
10:27 am | March 21, 2004
I couldn't finish reading your story. It was choppy at best and disorganized structurely at worst. If you revise it and post it again, then may be it will be better. I had to stop reading after 'Zamna showed up because i got a headache and nose bleed. 'Remotely position of the Jera III' is not a goodway to describe the reason why they are on planet.
Good luck with it though


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