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Comments for 'Its Just One of Those Days (Prologue: 04)' |
Hunter_Killer
8:02 pm | August 19, 2003
YAY!!! HUNTERS KILLED!!!!! Er... Excellent story, I mean.
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Mainevent
12:50 am | August 16, 2003
Good story, but 240 pounds is nothing for the ghost.
After all, a half ton Spartan rides them like there's no tomorrow.
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Alpha Lance
9:07 pm | August 15, 2003
Alot better man,9/10.
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scope
8:22 pm | August 15, 2003
10/10 I love it! Cant wait for more!
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Spartan 117
8:00 pm | August 15, 2003
man, this was no way as a good as the "slap stick" humor you put ou for us before. but it was ok. 9/10, and while gizim had plenty of his own cowardice, the other grunts seemed like experienced soldiers. in the game it is projected that all the grunts are cowardly cannon fodder who only fight because if they don't their own forces will torture them. that was the only thing i think that could be improved, and i want you to keep on writing. especially the humor! ;)
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Hawk7886
6:52 pm | August 15, 2003
The humor was alot more professional, a very nice break from your usual slap stick. I love this a whole lot more, now I can't complain ;)
Kudos on the work, keep up the subtle humor.
9/10
P.S. Make the next one longer, I felt as though I missed something funny ;P
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Ishkabibbl
4:59 pm | August 15, 2003
Alot better then before.
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Elfster
3:07 pm | August 15, 2003
Yeah. This is only the first part of the AOTCR lvl though, so it won't have that much action, when they find more survivors, thats when i cant decide whether they find "Something" and go with the mystery side, or find marines and have it end with action.
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Da Mann
12:30 pm | August 15, 2003
Hmmm, it's better and sounds more professional. But the humor seems to be a little short; it needs to be less subtle.
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