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Comments for 'Its Just One of Those Days (prologue: 2)'



scope
9:32 pm | August 11, 2003
this story is ok
Bean
8:31 pm | July 14, 2003
love it,the cursing makes it better!
Hawk7886
11:31 am | July 12, 2003
Jeez man, brutal. I think you captured the feeling of war pretty well. Sad part was, I didn't laugh once. Still looking forward to the next one. Hope It will be funnier.
Vege7a
3:39 am | July 12, 2003
That was freakin' awesome! [and funny to boot!] I especially liked the: "I FUCKING MADE IT!" part. :]
Elfster
2:47 am | July 12, 2003
Yeah, all my comedy went into the three official episodes, I just do this to keep you all reading while I sit here at the fan fic submission forum starely at a blank story screen looking stoned =)
Intremo
8:26 pm | July 11, 2003
Hi i love the comedy havent read the other part so what if you sweared
'Nosolee
12:57 pm | July 11, 2003
Yeah, good action, a little choppy. I didn't really mind the cursing, but all in all: 8.75/10
BlackValkyire
8:51 am | July 11, 2003
Hmmm intresting if not a bit crude. Good action.
Elfster
4:10 am | July 11, 2003
I did it because Johnson was supposed to be really pissed off. I tried not to over-due it but I couldn't help myself.
Jamirus99
3:45 am | July 11, 2003
Oops....sorry bout that, my computer had a problem and it triple-posted ;)
Jamirus99
3:41 am | July 11, 2003
Um, okay, what's with the cursing? Other than that, and some initial choppiness, the story really smoothes out and is actually quite funny. Good job.
Jamirus99
3:41 am | July 11, 2003
Um, what's with the cursing? Other than that, and some initial choppinessin he beginning, the story is smooth, and actually quite funny. Good job!
Jamirus99
3:41 am | July 11, 2003
Um, what's with the cursing? Other than that, and some initial choppiness in the beginning, the story is smooth, and actually quite funny. Good job!


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