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Comments for 'Wings of Death part 4: Countdown'

2:40 am | September 19, 2002
I think your writing has developed so you are not just a one horse and pony show. You can write comedy, action, and drama. Although we all can still improve on our works, I've enjoyed your writing.

What do you want to write about, what do you enjoy writing about, what would challenge your writing abilities, etc.

I say continue writing, make the story as you go along, you will know when you are ready to move on.

2:20 am | September 19, 2002
calm down Wado lol. should I continue wih this series???
7:37 pm | September 18, 2002
*darn typo in my comment, "you gun" s/b "your gun"
7:33 pm | September 18, 2002
Not much to say, I like it.

"Darn it Keys, err Diablo. If I've told you once, I've told you a million times, THIS is NOT you gun, ... THIS is your WEAPON."

"Sir, yes sir..."

Diablo? Don't get confused on this...lol