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Comments for 'Shadows of....My Ass (yet another comedy)'

killerof 900hunters
3:47 pm | January 6, 2004
i like cortana the blue lady
killerof 900hunters
3:45 pm | January 6, 2004
this game is the best for the x-box i got all books i killd over 900 hunters so at my house im ranked #i same in the hood
5:35 am | February 22, 2003
I'm pleased you liked them, feel free to read my other fics. :)
4:39 am | February 1, 2003
GhostmouthZach ( same person as superz423)
4:34 am | February 1, 2003
Oh my God, man that was soooo, funny, Come up with another. My greatest compleiments!!!!!!
12:54 pm | January 10, 2003
Sorry I am a little late El_Halo_Diablo. I didn't see your story. I musta been wasted when it came out. Anywayz, nice to see you are making a come back with your comedies. Everyone has already said all the funny parts....Bastards ;D But i especially liked the part with Wu. Lol. I was laughing my ass off. Hopefully we will see more comedies EHY?
Mutated Elite
6:27 pm | January 1, 2003
7:34 pm | December 25, 2002
yes I did, I wanted to give credit to the best movie ever. But I changed it a little bit.
7:07 pm | December 25, 2002
did you get the doll thing from space balls?
2:33 am | December 25, 2002
although i love SC and halo both, the two games are better seperated. we need original names and character models.
6:45 pm | December 24, 2002
Thanks everyone. Yes my final fan fic is loosly based on the 1930's movie "All Quiet on the Western Front" I saw it in my World History class and it was very excellent. It's based on a group of young aldults who decide to join the army because of the romance of war, and for the good of thier kind. I can assure you guys it will be a great story!(even for the poeple who have already seen the movie). Anyone else care to chime in?
MC Hammer
1:57 pm | December 24, 2002
Great story. I'm a fan of ur wings of death series, and this was dropdead hilarious. Thanks for the Starcraft refrence, as it seems that a lot of these Halo critters are based of starcraft characters. (Elites plama blade, Zealots psionic blades and Dark Templars Plasma blade,plus a cloaking device like the silver elites have) Cant forget ghosts and spartans, supersoldiers that have been trained since childhood, and the zerg, who create species into there fold by assimilating creaturs, much like the flood. Me thinks Protoss and Covenant and Zerg and Flood were seperated at birth. (By the way, an archon was one of the 9 chief magistrates in Ancient Athens, but the energy being archon is pure starcraft.)
5:33 am | December 24, 2002
MC should have thrown the doll at Val when he screamed "What!" at her.

Then the MC kickin a little kid......That was goddamn hilarious. Reminded me of something Homer Simpson would do.

Hella funny story....it was like British humor. Most of the story was cool, but not that funny. But the funny parts were absolutely hysterical.
4:57 am | December 24, 2002
saw it in euro. nice movie from a german pov.
4:02 am | December 24, 2002
All Quiet on the Western front? A world war one drama about a Germanic soldier in the trenches on the fronlines by france. I had to see the movie in Social Studies...
4:00 am | December 24, 2002
The Barbie part was great...

"Did you see what I was doing" said MC, I think...

"No, I didn't see you playing dolls again..." hahahahaha!
3:09 am | December 24, 2002
this was sweet, and i don't know what else to say is that it is sweet
3:06 am | December 24, 2002
I still dont get it I read it again its just not...
3:04 am | December 24, 2002
How does not finding this humorous make me indifferent? Well it does I don't really care but that's just a crappy way to use the word.
2:53 am | December 24, 2002
LOL. Good job, buddy. Sarge, lighten up, man! Have you become that apathetic/ thethargic?
2:19 am | December 24, 2002
Thanks alot for you comments! I hope you guys keep reading my other fan fics, I think the next one (Wings of Death Part 19) is the ending. After that, then Im writing my final fan fic "All Quiet on the Western Front". More feedback is appreciated! :D
8:30 pm | December 23, 2002
7:00 pm | December 23, 2002
Well the uh Martha Stewart part was funny at least...
6:04 pm | December 23, 2002
Spartan 3
5:59 pm | December 23, 2002
Good job :)
5:33 pm | December 23, 2002
4:00 pm | December 23, 2002
*grabs the MC doll and the Elite doll and runs away with them*
3:58 pm | December 23, 2002
YES, YES!!!!! Damned him and his gay Archron stories.....
Metal Gear Miltie
3:54 pm | December 23, 2002
2:41 pm | December 23, 2002
im still laughing at that, that was hilarious
1:25 pm | December 23, 2002
10:18 am | December 23, 2002
the starcraft thing, im not talking bout wado, i meant the author: ShibizzleBlahBlahMooShoobies.
10:14 am | December 23, 2002
diablo man, you've been the comedian on crack since the beginning. this was great. it went from mc playing with dolls to wado and the director wasted. What an intriguing plot. maybe ill use my nerdy sci-fi mentality to regenerate wado. hummm, mana mana...greeen mana.....oop...guess i dont have enough. c ya wado. splat. Nice to point out the SC thing. i wanted to say from day 1 that he bit SC and spat it out at HBO, that he cant come up with good names for beans...but i tried to be nice. well someone had to say it....
kid Buu
7:59 am | December 23, 2002
7:34 am | December 23, 2002
Nice... I posted more in the christmas ont eh frontlines by accident.. so go read the comments there if you want to see the rest... Sorry... But I am really confused lately...