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Comments for 'Battle for Croton 5 If a big purple dinosaur can be your friend why not a big blue Alien?'



Alpha Lance
10:33 pm | October 24, 2003
Damn! I'm starting to agree with Dispraiser. 'Cause y'all are using the HBO writing code poorly. If y'all just read the damn guidlines and all of the stuff that say, read this and on the submit form, then y'all will know how to indent!!!!!!!!!!
Hershberger
3:48 pm | October 24, 2003
I keep trying to indent but each time i submit it removes it, is there some
thing i'm missing or does the world just hate me.
me
2:42 am | October 23, 2003
i like the part about the hairy women, that was the best
Dispraiser
1:42 am | October 23, 2003
Short, simple, my review that is.

Flackfic review of 3. Roughly equal to an 8/10, but I factor in a sort of tilt.

The title was too long, and that pissed me off (shoudl have been a subhead in the story) and nothing was too special there. Down one more for no use of HBO code. If you have a fanfic that is going to do anything on HBO, it has to be indented.

Look at any successful fic from Wado, and it is indented and double spaced (I think...)
Alpha Lance
1:17 am | October 23, 2003
What, are y'all taking turns writing this series.

BTW, nice story.
Boxer [subnova]
1:23 pm | October 22, 2003
WOO!! That's all I have to say about that...well except maybe this "What kind of crack were you smoking Hershberger?" ;) Looks like it's my turn to write...damn you didn't give me much to work with...hmmm

-B


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