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Knightmare Wolf(MM
1:00 am | November 12, 2002
Alright thats it!!! lol... ME dammit... MEEE! Sheesh. Hating this imposter thing...
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Bruce
8:37 pm | November 11, 2002
Intresting story. Of course it is kind of confusing, it's good nonetheless.
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Neco Divad
8:51 am | November 11, 2002
should I even get involved? It was a good story. There. 'runs away before someone can steal his name'
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saturn
7:27 am | November 11, 2002
oh man i would normally back up knightmarewolf, but whos who?!
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Colonel Miltie
5:01 pm | November 10, 2002
We're gonna die!!!!!! SHUT UP MARINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Colonel Miltie
4:57 pm | November 10, 2002
Harshly.
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Colonel Miltie
4:54 pm | November 10, 2002
Don't worry about Anonymous, Dyn. If he insults you, I'll insult him.
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Knightmare(MM
4:21 pm | November 10, 2002
hey i didn't post either of those (merry marines its time for some action)
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Knightmare(MM
5:24 am | November 10, 2002
Umm.... I didn't post that.
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Knightmare(MM
1:16 am | November 10, 2002
remember when you critized a certian poster named no one well no one is back Knightmare(MM
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Dyn
12:00 pm | November 9, 2002
My next story will be alot better.
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Dyn
12:00 pm | November 9, 2002
My next story will be alot better.
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-.-
4:54 am | November 9, 2002
divide*
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Knightmare(MM
4:48 am | November 9, 2002
And just to give something constructive...
I thought it was an... Interesting story with a kind of an already used point of view. It was in a kind of a script format with like... all caps. VERY hard to read. Maybe you could try italics to stick emphasis on certain words or bold stuff to divite the lines up, and if it must be in a script-like format maybe you could post actions in asterix or.... stars or whatever the heck they're called.
If it MUST be like a script then space the lines out so its not such a big... hard-to-read chunk, or something. There's little more I can say that's honest, other than uh... Oh, damn....
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Knightmare(MM
4:45 am | November 9, 2002
Naw, dude. We have numerous 'secret' operatives... See the tree over there? - Opps.
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Sarge
2:14 am | November 9, 2002
It stands for Minny Me's.
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Bruce
11:08 pm | November 8, 2002
lol anyway good story.
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Bruce
11:08 pm | November 8, 2002
Darn! You took my question!! I think it stands for merry marines...
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Wado
10:57 pm | November 8, 2002
what does the mm stand for ...LOL
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Colonel Miltie
10:54 pm | November 8, 2002
Why didn't I think of this??? Oh well. Very nice!
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Dyn
10:47 pm | November 8, 2002
my next story will be longer
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Nike(yet again)
10:12 pm | November 8, 2002
S***! I didn't see that it was Knightmare, though it may be an imposter. Okay, I'll stop now.
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Nike
10:12 pm | November 8, 2002
I mean *short* story.
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Nike
10:11 pm | November 8, 2002
By the way, nice story.
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Nike
10:02 pm | November 8, 2002
(MM stand for Merry Marines. EVERYBODY knows the Merry Marines are: Knightmare, Arch, Spartan415, and I think that's it.
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Knightmare(MM
9:53 pm | November 8, 2002
what does the mm stand for
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Dyn
9:17 pm | November 8, 2002
i just sent in my next story.
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Dyn
5:42 pm | November 8, 2002
I'm working on another story now and it will be alot better ,longer and in a more storylike form.
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masterchief15
5:28 pm | November 8, 2002
It was pretty good although it was hard to understand why the person watching was fast fowarding when they were fighting and not while it was a boring part.(No offense) It might be easier to read if you say who was talking after they said it not before it and to give each person there own paragraph. A good example of this is Halo: The Final Fight there are two chapters out so far and I really like that story. keep up the good work.
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Dyn
4:56 pm | November 8, 2002
Its my first time so I know its not very good but I tried.
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