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Comments for 'Halo Side Story Chapter Two: Getting to know you'



Jaren
10:37 pm | October 21, 2002
Just as good as i expected it to be. Very realistic to in the fact that even the most calm minds become extremely erratic in the heat of battle. Keep up the good work man.
Wado
2:02 pm | September 11, 2002
Surprised nobody has posted about this story yet -- it was pretty good. I like the background info on the team, especially the things like they all sat in the same positions -- how true human nature is, creatures of habit.

I liked the battle scene but I felt it out of place. I think I expected the main characters might have used some of those skills/attributes you described a bit at the beginning -- a little more development of the characters while in combat.

Keep writing, I want to see what happens next.


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