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Comments for 'Legend Hunting Part Three'

3:31 am | February 6, 2003
One comment... Crap...
11:57 pm | January 30, 2003
I liked it and anticipate the next part, since I am wondering what happens to him, and what about the "Deal" she was talking about. Though there were a few mistakes. The biggest mistake was at the end, when the woman took the pistol and
" stuck near the bottom of my chin" Also as I've said before I like it how you keep such a steay pace, and it's just like my old science teacher used to say before I moved
" Hurry up and take your time" Well keep at it and happy writing. ^_^