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Comments for 'On A Red Horse: Chapter 3' |
Diamond Dog
11:30 pm | November 5, 2003
Okay man I'm sorry I haven't done any since then, because I thought the series was a dud and no one liked it. I'll continue it since you want to read it. I have it all figured out, and I'll have the next part done as soon as I can cram it in between football and homework.
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Delta117
4:46 am | August 27, 2003
Sorry Dude. It was a while since I read your story but it was awsome. I enjoyed greatly. Man, I have been looking for your chapter 4 for a long time. Though I hope you read this. Your detail was fabulous. I have a question though, did Santa Cruz have his SMGs with magazine clips inside facing him in that he would not worry of oqured relaoding stages.(I know what it said in the story, but was that one of his customizations?)
I find greatly that your story is well detailed and descriptive than your first original. It make the story awsome. I just wished I could write detailed like yours and be reasonably short.
Another question. When the Delta Team entered in the Shuttle bay, wouldn't there be any problem with open space barrier or is there a gravity field presurving the oxygen when the bay's doors are open?
Anyway, Great story. Hurry up with the others I can't wait to read them.
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MadJackal
1:44 pm | July 20, 2003
Good one. Well writen, good descriptions, good plot. The structure of the story was great and it was very exciting. I enjoyed reading that one a lot. Keep it up.
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Diamond Dog
6:59 pm | July 11, 2003
Will someone please post a comment? Please? I put a lot of effort into this one.
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Diamond Dog
5:08 pm | July 10, 2003
Hellooo? Hello? I feel lonely.
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Diamond Dog
9:38 pm | July 9, 2003
Anyone? Anyone? Any comments?
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