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Comments for 'Halo 2: Hope for Mankind Chapter 1: After the Destruction of Halo'



andy
12:16 am | May 30, 2003
Not bad, bro, but just try to be more detailed. If you were, you might really have something w/ this series. :)
Dark_Elite
9:34 pm | April 5, 2002
You should write more of this series.
Stone
2:24 am | March 10, 2002
I like where the plot's heading. Only one problem, use more elaboration, not just his basic actions. Other than that, nice. Keep it up.
Anonymous
7:23 pm | March 6, 2002
Keep writing it sounds good.
Anonymous
1:18 am | March 4, 2002
make it longer.
killa_snypa7
8:42 pm | March 1, 2002
very good, keep it up Demonic


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