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Comments for 'Marines: Rise from the Fall/ Section 1' |
SOS.Odin
9:25 pm | September 24, 2003
i thought it was great
grammar wasnt too bad
yall bein really hard on him
READ MINE :D
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Delta117
5:04 am | August 27, 2003
I surtanly am going to finish my story. Though I am slow on writing it now, but I am going to try to have strict grammor checking this time. Hold in, Walker, it's coming in soon. Oh, if you see anything that quite unrealistic, please inform me quickly. :)
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Spartan117
1:10 am | August 27, 2003
Dude, grammer was horrable. A lot of wrong spelling and PT training? that means Phisical Training Training... Get with it dude
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Walker
7:53 pm | August 24, 2003
i don't know if you ever mean to finish this series, but i've been waiting for a looooooong time...
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Delta117
8:45 pm | August 10, 2003
I think it makes him, Daniel Scott, desperate for a girlfriend, and a nice warm bed with only sunny days and absolutely no worries. This of course are both high hopes. After all, the Covenant are here to glass him and the planet.
Though, could there be chance of survival...?
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Spartan 117
11:36 am | August 10, 2003
yeah, after all how can she think of being someone's girfriend after she just abandoned her child to be killed by covenant. she'll probly kill herself outta guilt if she survives...
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The Karate Kid
7:44 pm | August 9, 2003
Hey, I wonder if she'll be my girlfriend!
It was an okay story but it had some corny parts like the one listed above.
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Alpha Lance
3:41 pm | August 9, 2003
Essay that kickass,and ya that was pretty long,
but nice. 9.4/10
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scope
2:02 am | August 8, 2003
9/10 Good job. Nice and long too.
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Tango709
1:08 am | August 8, 2003
though you do have to admit that "This is one great show to die in." is an awesome ending line.
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Tango709
1:08 am | August 8, 2003
i like the idea of desperation and a last ditch stand against the covenant on a doomed planet, but the grammar was terrible. Mispellings like "Sarg" instead of Sarge also bothered me. good story, though.
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