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Comments for 'Halo- The Fallen Place pt1'



Darth Lord
9:41 pm | August 13, 2003
THX
Jackal Jak
9:14 pm | August 13, 2003
You really need to work on your grammar. But, overall, it was a good story, kinda short though. Keep up the good work.
Darth Lord
7:57 pm | August 13, 2003
Hope you all liked the Story its my first one :)


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