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Comments for 'A World Apart Ch. 2' |
Dark Spartan
3:45 pm | July 24, 2003
first of all,"Ishkabibbl", I have no idea what you mean. to "..." you indent by placing "[indent]" in front of whatever you want to indent, EXCEPT leave out those quotation marks.OK whatever "Scope". Finally to "Steele". I see your point and yes I have read both of the Halo books, but I cannot remember all the minor details like the mandible clicking "sigh". I also would appreciate it if you told me at what parts the Covenant are resembling the humans too much, and then I'll try to fix it in later chapters.thanks and see you guys later.
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Ishkabibbl
9:41 pm | July 22, 2003
I'm to cheap to buy it, and so are the five others ahead of me...being 6th on hold sucks.
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Steele
5:58 pm | July 22, 2003
I know why it's called fan fiction, but the Covenant just act TOO much like humans. Have you read Halo: The Flood?
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DeadpoolWW
5:42 pm | July 22, 2003
Dark Sparten,
The book is awesome. I cant wait for more. The characters are very original and the descriptions are incredibly real. I'll be waiting for chapter 3. Eagle Pride.
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...
3:57 pm | July 22, 2003
so how do i indent?
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scope
3:09 pm | July 22, 2003
HAHAHA Im going to Florida for 2 weeks! I might miss u guys but ill be too busy looking at girls! HAHAHA!!!Goodbye everyone!
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'Nosolee
11:29 am | July 22, 2003
Really cool story. 9.5/10
What sort of creature is Jarek?
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Ishkabibbl
3:25 am | July 22, 2003
Awww, ain't that cute, Jarek saved that elite's ass from being fried.
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Sartan-41
2:20 am | July 22, 2003
Hey I think this is a good book,keep up the good work...and by the way i see what The Dark Spartan means by "FAN FICTION"...FICTION FICTION FICTION,Fiction-NOT REAL!!!!!So give the guy a break...Awsome book!!!
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Dark Sparten (The Author)
2:13 am | July 22, 2003
Hey dudes look at the top of the screen where the little thing is thats not pert of the book and read it, it says that jarek is...u look at it and find out your self. To Steele,Sorry if the story is not perfect,thats why its called "FAN FICTION".
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Steele
10:24 pm | July 21, 2003
Kinda strange, but nicely written. The Covenant society mirrored too much of ours. There was SpecOps, our language usage and our gestures. At one point Jarek sighed, but a Covenant's equal of a human sigh is clicking their mandibles.
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