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Comments for 'Barker's Stand: Part I' |
Mainevent
11:29 am | May 6, 2004
Author: No problem. Just take comments seriously (the serious comments, not the stupid ones). Even if they are degrading, if they are serious use the improvements to get better. It only helps.
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Nick Kang
11:04 am | May 6, 2004
lol, Hotel, Golf. I'll use that in future stories, thanks Main. Anyway, about the story, it was great. The detail was thick throughout the storyline. Keep it up.
NK
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Mainevent
10:33 am | May 6, 2004
Kilo
Quebec
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CoLd BlooDed
2:54 am | May 6, 2004
Oh, and spectre...
Zooloo is spelt Zulu.
(Damn't, I know Q and K, too.)
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CoLd BlooDed
2:47 am | May 6, 2004
Great story, enjoyed every bit of it. And yes, listen to Helljumper and Mainevent. Beta should be Bravo, but it's up to you whether or not you change it.
Keep it up, and thanks for reading my story.
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spectre
1:41 am | May 6, 2004
alpha
bravo
charlie
delta
echo
foxtrot
golf
hotel
india
juliet
lima
micheal
november
osca
papaa
romeo
sierra
tango
unicorn
victor
whiskey
x-ray
yankee
zooloo
SFC. Smith is gonna kill me! I forgot Q and K.
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The author
8:27 pm | May 5, 2004
sorry main, didnt notice.
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The author
8:27 pm | May 5, 2004
sorry helljumper, didnt notice.
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Mainevent
7:42 pm | May 5, 2004
The military uses a standard alphabet lingo.
Alpha
Bravo
Charlie
Delta
Echo
Foxtrot
Golf
Hotel
etc.
If you want the rest look them up.
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Helljumper
5:56 pm | May 5, 2004
good story, how many times do i have to say it. Marines work in fire teams, squads, platoons, companies etc. not Squadrons. squadrons are for planes like Longsword fighters and Pelicans. Also Marines us Bravo not Beta for unit names.
it was a good story though.
ODST
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Snake Solid 117
4:51 pm | May 5, 2004
A good story. I really liked it. The grammer, for as far as i could tell was good, and the spelling was great. I liked this story quite a bit. Good job.
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