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Comments for 'Trapped Part : Gunned Down' |
fortune
10:36 pm | March 3, 2004
But it was still good
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fortune
10:34 pm | March 3, 2004
Gretw is the author and is just wanting to make himself feel better because he knows people will be mean to him
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Reituyej
5:30 pm | March 1, 2004
I liked the story. Although there wasn't much detail.
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Mind_Affecting_Parasite
2:17 pm | February 27, 2004
Well, I suppose your a Newb too, so I wont try to bash you. It needs work, like I'm finding all FFs do. Just...listen to helpful comments.
-MAP
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CoLd BlooDed
12:15 pm | February 26, 2004
Yeah, Gretw, what the hell are you on? These are the stories where the author can improve a lot more, escpecially on story structure and details.
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MC's Cousin
5:39 pm | February 25, 2004
"Great" what are you on Gretw? That equaled basically a massive paragraph without the code, and that brings headaches and anger. Try using the ENTER button on your keyboard more, and al your storyline included was BIG and FAT and rambling.
Signing Off
MCC
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Helljumper
5:28 pm | February 25, 2004
Its probably a good story but i couldn't finnish it. It gets confusing, and u lack details. I don't care about any of the characters.
ODST
Feet first into Hel
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Gretw
1:02 pm | February 25, 2004
It is a great story. Can't wait for the rest.
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