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Awacar
3:02 pm | February 4, 2004
I... I... I didn't really understand this one. That's all I can say.
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CoLd BlooDed
4:21 am | February 4, 2004
No offense but I find the storyline corny, and the grammar shitty. Too short as well.
Make more improvements and maybe I'll read your other stories.
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Sherveen Mashayekhi
2:19 am | February 4, 2004
LoLz you think MC will help against the humans? LoLz. Nice storyline, but it was executed very poorly. Nice try.
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