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Comments for 'Halo: Protect the Homestead Chapter 1'

12:56 pm | March 27, 2002
good story, just some minor faults -Jacob Keyes is dead(Keyes, lvl 9)The Covenant use Pulse Cannons, not MAC GunsIroqouis is spelled Iroqouis
6:27 pm | March 26, 2002
A bit of work on grammar and punctuation would make this story easier to read. The main error is "there" instead of "their" in lots of places. Other than that, you've got the beginning of a good story here!
Joe shmoe
5:01 pm | March 24, 2002
Nice story