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Comments for 'The Flood: A force to be reckoned with (Part 2)'

5:24 am | August 1, 2003
well thanx hunterkiller, thatz a change of mood lol:)
9:14 pm | July 29, 2003
Well it was better than the last one. 8/10
4:57 am | July 23, 2003
pfff, nah they dont have potential, i just like thingz about the flood n stuff. your story was kool as tho, only prob was it didn't leave much space for a sequal! lol. but thatz how u wanted it wasn't it? newayz yeah we should pair up sum day. Should be kool as
9:12 pm | July 22, 2003
Hey, got your comment on mine. Your stories aren't bad at all! Anyway, perhaps we can team up and make a series. I've got a few ideas but I haven't had time to start in depth on any of them. Hope you get to write part 3, there is potential in this series.
10:42 am | July 22, 2003
thanx madjackal, at least someone likes it. i dunno if i'm gonna have a number 3
2:13 am | July 19, 2003
Good story, better than the first. Looking forward to the next one. Keep it up!
8:00 am | May 19, 2003
i guess she didn't detect it, because she was only concerned about getting away from the ring. and she possibly wouldn't have thought much of a battered covenant ship with its engines offline
12:03 am | May 18, 2003
Not bad, not bad; 8/10. Just use [indent].However, if the Covanent ship was still alive, how come Cortana did'nt detect it?
5:47 am | May 12, 2003
a good story, well put together. a big improvement on the first and it was good how you made the story of the covenant and not of mc. I liked it how you let us get 2 know some of the characters. a good story well done