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Nightblade
4:55 pm | July 9, 2004
this sux!!
MadJackal
10:15 pm | May 26, 2004
Haha, that was great! I love how your poems are written in joke form, with the buildup and then the great pickup lines at the end. Keep 'em coming!
Elite Zop
6:03 pm | May 20, 2004
HA! I told ya I can make people mad!!:D
crashedwarthog
8:27 am | May 19, 2004
LEARN HOW TO WRITE REAL COMEDY POEMS?? FUCK YOU YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE I KNOW MORE THAN YOU AND I DEFINITLY KNOW HOW TO WRITE SO GO STICK YOUR HEAD UP YOUR MAMA'S ASS

good girl.
Elite Zov
8:00 pm | May 18, 2004
DAMN!..by the way, next time learn how to write REAL comedy peoms.
Elite Zov
7:57 pm | May 18, 2004
WHO YOU CALLING GIRL, GIRL PANTS!
Elite Zov
7:57 pm | May 18, 2004
WHO YOU CALLING GIRL, GIRL PANTS!
crashedwarthog
7:51 am | May 18, 2004
oh no i'm not mad, i'm just really confused as to what the hell that comment of yours was, i mean it made no sense at all, you were drunk weren't you? lol.

by the way, if what u said was supposed to get me mad, u suck at making people mad.

Make sense next time ok?

good girl
Elite Zov
2:51 am | May 17, 2004
Shut up! Go get some juise, I bet you're out,CRASHEDwarthog.
Elite Zov
2:51 am | May 17, 2004
Oh, sorry! crashedwarthog, if you're out of juice, that means you can't get to the gas station. Nevermind.

P.S. if you're mad, i'm pretty good at making people mad, even if i don't mean it. Especially the once that pissing me off.
crashedwarthog
5:49 am | May 14, 2004
geez sum1'z been stuck on the WOWEE 'sauce' methinx
Elite Zov
1:33 pm | May 13, 2004
hay hay, you make the poor kid cry! (hes only 7, what the hell you want form him?) I know the "WOWEE" guy, he lives next door form me. AND HE CAME COMPLAINING TO ME!! HE WAS IN MY HOUSE FOR 2 HOURS. I din't even got the desent sleep! But the best thing fot you, he ant' going back here on this side again.
crashedwarthog
3:48 am | May 9, 2004
haha well it's more for the smart yet idiot people:D
CovieKilla
12:57 am | May 9, 2004
Not bad...Not that bad at all. Wasnt as funny as it was child-like. Good work though, keep it up.
Riley217
7:48 pm | May 8, 2004
Yeah funny I was laughing all the way home!
Solidus Snake
6:07 pm | May 8, 2004
It was kinda funny, but it was still a nice read.
Nick Kang
11:40 am | May 8, 2004
I never said this one wasn't funny...I said to make the next one funnier. :)

NK
crashedwarthog
7:33 am | May 8, 2004
by the way Nick, i'm sorry this one wasn't very funny, i'll try better next time...if there is one:D
crashedwarthog
7:30 am | May 8, 2004
hehe glad you guys liked it, i just like making my poems simple, quaint, and just something to lighten up someone's day:P

as CoLd said, i've written another one before, read that if you want.

and sterfrye, i read your part 17 the other day, ROCK on man! i really love that series:D:D
Sterfrye36
3:21 am | May 8, 2004
Cute, Warthog, cute. BTW, check out my latest battle for the Norah submission: Part 17! (It's about a page back)
CoLd BlooDed
1:26 am | May 8, 2004
I'm guessing our newcomer doesn't speak very good english and used a translation site...
CoLd BlooDed
1:26 am | May 8, 2004
"Keep it on!"

Just an example.
Nick Kang
6:30 pm | May 7, 2004
Ummm...It's...not my poem. And it's called 'Halo', not 'Helo'.

NK
CoLd BlooDed
3:57 pm | May 7, 2004
Erm... it's not Nick Kang's poem.
CoLd BlooDed
3:57 pm | May 7, 2004
It was the second best comedy poem I've read...

...and the first best was the other comedy poem you've made.
WOWEE!
1:35 pm | May 7, 2004
I'm new hear, and I wanned to show my own craevetivity by writing some stories, I can't help now to play Helo, and when Helo 2 will come out, IT"LL ROCK THE WORLD!! But your poem is sooo nice. I smooths the rhymes! :) Hay, thats rhymes!I liked it, and I can bet that everyone else would. Well, in my point of veiw, I loved it.

Thax for your poem Nick Kang, keep it on!
Nick Kang
10:10 am | May 7, 2004
lol, pretty funny, but next time you write one make it funnier!

NK


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