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Comments for 'To Hell And Back- Chapter 1: Just A Breath Of Vengeance'

8:42 pm | July 17, 2004
Rofl, people. lol...Well thanks for the welcoming back. Just to clear up a few things Lombardi IS an ODST, but Colin isnt. Colin says the Flesh thing because he is a marine like him....I should have made that more apparent but what can ya do?

Anyway, I'll be submitting Chapter 2 very soon. Thanks for the critism again, btw.
Dave Luck
5:42 pm | July 12, 2004
Great... Great...

I like that. Heh. I like what he says.

And I like symbolism. The Cigar.

There's a philosophical meaning in this, not just literal.

Keep it up.

- Dave.

P.S Sorry about the lack of long posts, I'm looking for n00bs to flame, and I'm in the wrong place.
12:11 am | July 12, 2004
Hey, I distinctively remember Killa saying that they weren't ODSt.
11:56 am | July 11, 2004
So, these guys AREN'T ODST, right? I'm still getting confused about that...

But asides that, wow x 3.
8:15 am | July 11, 2004
Great job, Covie. I especially liked the attitude. Keep writing.

C.T. Clown
Agent Shade
4:21 am | July 11, 2004
Huzzah? forgive me if i'm wrong, but didn't the Britains cheer that? kinda like a "Hip Hip Hooray" thing?

anyway, told you people would like it Covie, continue ASAP
3:50 am | July 11, 2004
I think they are, Severian...
In one part it talked about the ODST insignia on Lombardi's uniform, and I think Colin Thompson is one too: "Flesh of my flesh, blood of my blood."
CoLd BlooDed
7:44 pm | July 10, 2004
I read it again and was impressed, you've definately got to keep this up, Covie.

And welcome back. Huzzah! Huzzah! Hu-- aw, forget it.
5:13 pm | July 10, 2004
This has awesome potential. Looking forward to the next parts.
Nick Kang
3:05 pm | July 10, 2004
Wow. That's all I gotta say...wow.