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Hawk7886
2:30 am | February 4, 2004
"Status?" The chief said to Cortana as they plunged through the atmosphere in their captured slip-space able phantom."

I seriously doubt an open-air Phantom would be capable of H-O flight, let alone Slip-Space capability.

"Sarge had his two pistols ready. . ."

He was holding two of the Mega-huge Pistols? If he tried to fire one of those beasts, it would snap his wrists like twigs.

Species like 'Elite', 'Jackal', 'Grunt', and 'Prophet' are always capitalized. Don't forget important groups like 'Covenant'.

"after the covenant found me floating in space"

When a human enters the vaccuum of space, their blood flash-boils, their lungs explosively decompress, and a bunch of other little nasties. Humans don't do too good out there. So I doubt that makes much sense, but it doesn't compare to the little question about him surviving a one hundred million degree campfire.

By Covenant Prophet a.k.a. Grunteater
Copyright Michael Mck. 2004-01-31. All rights reserved.

ROFLMAO!


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