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Comments for 'The Tides of War Part 2 "Unforseen Alliances" Chapter 6'



Fleet Admiral
8:13 pm | July 22, 2003
Great story line, but you need to tell more on the space battles. Can't wait for the next one.
Sarge
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I like the story however, it is a tad on the short side. While el_halo_diablo won't complain I will lol. JUst a bit longer and you'll be doing just great.
Anonymous
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Oh I have a glass longsword, and full glass armor.
Knightmare(MM
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
At some points I was saying 'The wording for that speech could have been a tinge better'. However I did like the story overall. Evil little slightly more advanced floating fishes better get it... Or they'll face my Glass Longsword.


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