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Comments for 'The Tides of War Part 2 "Unforseen Alliances" Chapter 5'

12:00 am | November 30, -0001
wow! i was minding my own business when this gold bullion of a fanfic popped up in front of me! more details on the prophetic corruption though.
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
nice twist on ya story. i really like it.
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
This is a good story. The rebel Covenant fleet is an interesting twist from the other stories I've seen so far. All I can add is that some proofreading will go a long way in polishing your style. Kudos!
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Thanks! I'll be explaining why the elite left the Covenant military and how the prophets became corrupt in my latter chapters.
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12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Good stuff. This is my favorite fic so far! Only one suggestion. Maybe expanding the reason why the Elite (Can't remember his name) left the fleet and more detail on the prophet corruption.