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Comments for 'The Wrath Of Earth's Children'



Conrad
11:29 am | April 14, 2004
Thanks guys, it's good to know SOMEONE likes my stories. Actually I've already written four other short stories since this one, but for some reason they haven't been posted yet...
Anyway, they are mostly about the other battles being fought around the galaxy, the ones we don't hear about in the game of Halo. They involve almost no dialogue( which in my opinion, is the most annoying piece of narratives to write) and plenty of violence and bloodshed.
Until our next meeting,
See yez later
MadJackal
5:09 pm | April 13, 2004
First of all, good story, considering you don't have the game (right?)
Oh, and Chief17, the chief WAS exhausted during Halo. In the book, by the end (perhaps the last three levels or so), he was really feeling the effects of the constant fighting big time.
BlackGhost
4:59 pm | April 12, 2004
It was good, it's just that a big block of text scares the crap outta me. Try to work on that. Other than that, pretty good. kepp up the good work.
Nick Kang
11:06 am | April 12, 2004
Stupid Americans? Whaddayou think you're talkin about?
Shani
4:39 am | April 12, 2004
Sorry guys. Im just in a pissed-off mood today
CoLd BlooDed
12:12 am | April 12, 2004
Shani, stfu, even though I'm not American, I still take offense to that.
Shani
8:56 pm | April 11, 2004
I agree with those bloody yanks who think they own everything. It was a pretty crap story even though i haven't read it. Stupid Americans! Burger and fries! I like candy bars! Halloween is stupid! Arghhhhhhhh! Aussies rule the world!
Shani
8:56 pm | April 11, 2004
I agree with those bloody yanks who think they own everything. It was a pretty crap story even though i haven't read it. Stupid Americans! Burger and fries! I like candy bars! Halloween is stupid! Arghhhhhhhh! Aussies rule the world!
Chief17
7:55 pm | April 11, 2004
It was bad,and how would they know what was in the covenant dropship? and why in the hell would the Chief be exausted....he wasnt exausted on halo,was he!
Conrad
8:04 am | April 11, 2004
Ok then. Using your suggestions and advice I'll write another one. But please keep in mind that im 14 years old and dont even own an xbox. I wrote this story from memory.
See yez later with a new (and hopefully better) story
The Razor
7:17 am | April 11, 2004
6/10
The Razor
7:17 am | April 11, 2004
6/10
The Razor
7:08 am | April 11, 2004
Well not the best but god.It was easy to understand.But I didn't know that Chief could be exhausted after all he did at halo.




God work. ;)
The Collector
1:44 am | April 11, 2004
hahahaha
Wiley
7:32 pm | April 10, 2004
You need paragraphs, and the Master Chief is capitalized.


8/10
Blue Jaguar
3:09 pm | April 10, 2004
.....someone has been playing Halo multiplayer wayyyyyyyyyyy too much, and forgot the real world physics laws. I won't mention anynames DEAN.
Nick Kang
11:26 am | April 10, 2004
Well, 'Dean', let's see you write something better. I thought this was a good story. Good detail and well explained battle sequences.

9.5/10

P.S. I suggest you don't say 'gay' anymore Dean it seems to be your favorite word.
Dean
11:09 am | April 10, 2004
I thought that it was gay that you explained everthing in the dropships and whats with the bomb thats gay and all in a big group around a warthog one grenade could take them out


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