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Comments for 'Fight for New Tatley Finale (Chapter 9: Saving New Tatley)'

CoLd BlooDed
12:58 pm | December 25, 2003
Oh yes, and now according to HBO, it is the 25th.

So lets wish Mainevent a happy birthday!
1:36 am | December 25, 2003
Happy birthday Mainevent, even though i dont know that well, but oh well.
CoLd BlooDed
9:33 pm | December 24, 2003
Yep, I think I'll do it Main, after much thought(Well, not really)I've decided thats an awesome idea.

I think I'll call it Forced Betrayel or Forced to Betray.
8:42 pm | December 24, 2003
Hmmm, Everything i want to say has once again been said below. 9/10
CoLd BlooDed
8:15 pm | December 24, 2003
Actually thats a pretty good idea, thanks Main I'll think about it. Would you proofread it and stuff if I did?

That would be a very big help, and we all know your an awesome writer.

But thanks for the idea....
5:33 pm | December 24, 2003
You could have a series based on the Field Commander who is tried and sentenced to death for failing to take New Tatley, and then he escapes with a small group of ships, or maybe a fleet, and he starts fighting the Covenant.
CoLd BlooDed
12:49 pm | December 24, 2003
Lets just say the Covenant temporarily "retreated".
6:45 am | December 24, 2003
i liked it, give em hell marines. good finale
CoLd BlooDed
5:55 am | December 24, 2003
O yeah, anyone have any suggestions for another series? LOL.
10:03 pm | December 23, 2003
Great, great, great, encore...sequel! I've very much enjoyed following this series and hope to see other great works from you CoLd.
8:51 pm | December 23, 2003
Not too shabby....
8:03 pm | December 23, 2003
Great finale...And I agree with Main, I dont think the Covenant would flee. A sequel to this would probobly be good I tell you! lol..9/10.
7:38 pm | December 23, 2003
Damn good finale.

Although, I doubt the Covenant would have just left, they never leave. But I'll go with it. Good job once again.
CoLd BlooDed
7:34 pm | December 23, 2003
Tell me what you think of this last chapter, please.