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Comments for 'Fight for New Tatley (Chapter 7: Covenant Crusade)'

CoLd BlooDed
12:56 pm | December 10, 2003
He was only with one, the female sergeant, and then two more ran up afterwards...
12:00 pm | December 10, 2003
Nice story. No grammer mistakes noticable. I just got one question. How many marines was he with before he went to the roof?
1:52 am | December 10, 2003
Yea, sweet job man.
Agent Shade
9:08 pm | December 9, 2003
i agree. although this is the first i've read you story, i think i get the idea of defending military bases from the Covenant and stuff....you're writing is impressive, keep it up dude
11:08 am | December 9, 2003
Pretty good. No error so noticeable anymore so as to distract from the story. Good job on cleaning up your act!