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CoLd BlooDed
8:44 pm | November 30, 2003
Oh ya, I also posted another story for FFNT and a poem called Never Deny.
CoLd BlooDed
7:39 pm | November 30, 2003
My other rhyme scheme (ABAB) poem is called "Everyone Dies", check that one out if you haven't already.
5:37 pm | November 30, 2003
A very stark, very harsh view of war. I love it. The rhyme scheme was simple (AABB), but nothing that really detracted from the poem as a whole- only a couple of lines where the structure sort of fractured as you squeezed to make it work. I'd love to see an ABAB from you.
12:33 pm | November 29, 2003
Yep, that was pretty damn good. Keep up the good work. And check out my poems, The End and Fight For Her.
8:55 pm | November 28, 2003
Pretty good. Maybe one of these days I'll have to try my hand at a poem..... ah, maybe not.
1:39 pm | November 28, 2003
Hmm... like a thousand years since Da Vinci (stupid vegetarians) invented the first working parachute (never got to use it, but they made an exact replica and tested it, it worked) and we're still using them in the 2500s... I'd think the Covies would have an easy job of shooting our guys out of the sky, but whatever. Maybe they're only used under cover of night?
3:51 am | November 28, 2003
Well, that was a bit of a shock

3:51 am | November 28, 2003
well,that was a bit of a shock
CoLd BlooDed
2:03 am | November 28, 2003
Yeah I know I'm reading "The Flood" once again, but I just included the chutes because I saw it in a picture for Halo 2. Maybe they weren't Helljumpers?
2:01 am | November 28, 2003
That's war for ya. But ODSTs don't use chutes. They use HEVs, or Human Entry Vehicles, a tube you climb in that has a chute. It shoots itself out of a spaceship, through the atmosphere, and lands on the ground. But it has such poor protection sometimes the Helljumpers burn up inside, literally. Hence their nickname. But I like it anyway. Like I said, that's war for ya.

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