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Comments for 'The Strive to Survive (Chapter 11: Friend and Foe?)'



Gallagher
1:10 am | June 23, 2004
awesome! keep it up!
Nick Kang
12:21 pm | June 21, 2004
Well, in any event, sorry about the double post thing. My computer's broken so I have to use the laptop, and it sometimes just clicks on stuff if you leave the cursor over a button too long.
And I was in a kinda wierd mood last night, so sorry.

NK
BansheeBoy
7:26 am | June 21, 2004
If your having trouble posting a story I have some advice. First click on the fan fic submission form( enter your story, details etc) and then give it a good 5 minutes. THen click the preview submission. (If it's fine) give it another good 5 minutes and then click submit. Keep this up until your fan fic is submitted!
If it doesn't work, don't complain cos it worked for me everytime!
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Agent Shade
6:36 am | June 21, 2004
sorry all the double posts were me, my computer was screwing up.
--88--
6:34 am | June 21, 2004
about two days fa sho
Sean
3:57 am | June 21, 2004
Um quick question how long do you have to wait for one of your storys to get posted here?
FOrunnER
3:48 am | June 21, 2004
Great story, but once they found out Sarah betrayed them I expected them to be some sort of conflict within the group to decide wether they kill her or not. Heck, at least a few bad words could have been thrown at her.

Other than that, great story.
CoLd BlooDed
2:04 am | June 21, 2004
Glad ya liked it, Sean. :) Thanks for taking the time to read.

Nick, are you talking to me? 'Cause I attempted to console you but failed miserably!
Sean
12:54 am | June 21, 2004
Best.Story.Ever.
Nick Kang
12:21 am | June 21, 2004
*sniff* I think you are a mean...person.

NK
CoLd BlooDed
12:18 am | June 21, 2004
Thanks you guys.
Wado
12:14 am | June 21, 2004
Not as good as I know you can do CoLd BlooDed, I know you can do better. All in all you could have done better.
Mastergrunt
12:12 am | June 21, 2004
Sorry I haven't posted lately but, I will start again since there isn't much to do in the summer and it's not like I'm in sports.
Mastergrunt
12:12 am | June 21, 2004
Sorry I haven't posted lately but, I will start again since there isn't much to do in the summer and it's not like I'm in sports.
teemus
12:11 am | June 21, 2004
Well Cold, long time not talk. Ive always enjoyed your stories and this one left me feeling good. Keep it up buddy.
CoLd BlooDed
10:15 pm | June 20, 2004
Since you took the time to double-post, I shall try and console you.

There, there, Nick, it'll be okay...
Nick Kang
4:10 pm | June 20, 2004
AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! I keep on trying to submit a story but the thing pops up that says This Page Cannot Be Displayed!

NK
Nick Kang
4:10 pm | June 20, 2004
AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! I keep on trying to submit a story but the thing pops up that says This Page Cannot Be Displayed!

NK
Nick Kang
1:03 pm | June 20, 2004
There was something like that in a 50Cent song my sister was listening to, Severian. Something like:
"I love you like a fat kid loves cake."

NK
CoLd BlooDed
9:56 pm | June 19, 2004
Thanks, Severian, I know you mean it. ;)
SeverianofUrth
9:48 pm | June 19, 2004
Hopefully, you'll have enough time to churn these out like bagles before school starts again, because I love these stories like I love bagels.
Helljumper
1:08 pm | June 19, 2004
I had thought this series had fallen off, but you made up for it. Good one.

ODST
Nick Kang
12:39 pm | June 19, 2004
Heck, before school got out, I didn't even have enough time to wait for my computer to start up.

NK
CoLd BlooDed
12:43 am | June 19, 2004
Thank you all, guys, thank you all. With school getting out, I'll finally have time to write.

And write I shall!
Solidus Snake
10:08 pm | June 18, 2004
Real good story my friend. Keep up the great work.
MC's Cousin
7:06 pm | June 18, 2004
Thank the makers of Halo for a wonderful piece of FF. I missed you CoLd. All I've had to read for the last week is crap. I know how Awacar feels. But.....
Anyway, the story was excellent. There were a few misuses of words and stuff of the like. Keep 'em comin'.

Signing Off


MCC
Mainevent
4:59 pm | June 18, 2004
Very good, definitely the best yet.

That HORE deserved it.
SeverianofUrth
4:55 pm | June 18, 2004
You should try doing a The Doors themed fiction. I tried doing one, failed unutterably. It's up right now. "The Flood in Me." People new to this site should read it if they want to learn how NOT to write.
SeverianofUrth
4:41 pm | June 18, 2004
What can I say? Things that needs to be said has been and will be said already. Excellent.
SOS.Odin
3:39 pm | June 18, 2004
excellent piece
doin better n ever i see
just better not have those Marines
get killed by retarded sentinels
sentinels are pussies :D
Awacar
1:50 pm | June 18, 2004
Ahh, the sweetness of a well written story.

It was quite long since I read a good peice of text, but this one stands out from the good I've read. I think this is the best of your series, Cold, and that it good!
Nick Kang
12:23 pm | June 18, 2004
Haha! The HORE blew her brains out! lol.
This story was great, but, hey, why wouldn't it be?

NK
343winks
11:29 am | June 18, 2004
Wow, this is the best I have read so far. Some of the marine speech is a little off, though, but other than that it's a good story. I can't wait to read what happans next.

Good story, I enjoy reading your work.


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