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Comments for 'The Strive to Survive (Chapter 2: Released)'

CoLd BlooDed
3:56 pm | February 24, 2004
Well, Awacar...Covenant are still coming, muahaha! :P
2:46 pm | February 24, 2004
More Flood, you must like them in a way to, or like reading about them. Creepy.

1:59 pm | February 24, 2004
I like this one. I think that you're the first author that has made it exciting to read close combat with Flood involved. Still, I'd like a Human/Covenant fight better, but you did the best of the material you had to work with.

Good story, and an excellent way to write about fighting the Flood.
CoLd BlooDed
12:49 pm | February 24, 2004
Thanks you guys, and to ONI, I'll try and keep you hooked. :P
MC's Cousin
11:28 am | February 24, 2004
Good Good and Goodness. I liked it, you gave it a good feel of suspense at times. I would say that your bridge if holding, for now...

Signing Off

3:17 am | February 24, 2004
i agree with pretty much everyone else
i thought it was great

and after five days of tryin
i finally submitted my next chapt
its not as good as any of the others
but theres shooting :D
its just there to let ppl know how the fight went
7:20 am | February 23, 2004
Good one CoLd, I like the way you write. Towards the end, it seemed like you just started to speed it up just so you could finnish. the details were great, I felt like i was there.
3:00 am | February 23, 2004
i like the way the one marine got locked out... made the story really realistic.

i cant wait to read the next chapter....... im hooked now

CoLd BlooDed
2:42 am | February 23, 2004
I thought I covered most of it in the first chapter, but yes, I was planning on doing that in future stories. Thanks FOrunnER.
2:28 am | February 23, 2004
I like it, it reminds me of Resident Evil the movie. I only have one request though, could you give a little backround info on how ONI found this Installation, if there are Covies on it, ect. ?
CoLd BlooDed
1:43 am | February 23, 2004
Too many Infection Forms, the Marine was too close to them and the others were afraid.
1:34 am | February 23, 2004
Why didn't they just let the marine in and then close the door or shoot the infection forms?
CoLd BlooDed
1:18 am | February 23, 2004
No more comments? :(
CoLd BlooDed
10:32 pm | February 22, 2004
There is no alarm installed in this base because no one thought that the Flood would be released. An unwise choice...
10:12 pm | February 22, 2004
Nice, but if the base has plenty of personal, then dont you think someone might of hit an alarm? Keep it up!