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Comments for 'Forced Betrayal (Chapter 7: Stranded With Only One Option)'



MadJackal
2:33 pm | July 20, 2004
Hey, thanks man. I know it took forever for me to get around to posting comments on these last two parts, and I apologize. I haven't had much time to write or hang around on HBO in a while. I've got a new series that I've started, designed to be a kind of successor to the Iron Hands of the Prophets. Not really, but it does take place soon after. Anyways, it should be pretty good, I've just got to start writing the rest of the parts.
CoLd BlooDed
11:59 pm | February 26, 2004
Now that I'm all wrapped up with this series and Mad is reading them, I'd just like to say to Mad that I appreciate your comments and still look at my old stories. :)
CoLd BlooDed
1:07 am | February 12, 2004
That is, if Hawk gets home on time to read it, edit it, and send it back to me so I can post it...

Its also the last chapter of the series.
Walker
1:25 pm | February 11, 2004
Bravo. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
CoLd BlooDed
12:04 pm | February 11, 2004
Thank you SO much JJiggssaw, you have really made my day, I appreciate the comment.

Did you leave any other comments on the other chapters? Well anyways, thanks, and I'm glad your a 'fan'. :P
Hawk7886
7:48 pm | February 10, 2004
Yup, he's got a lot of skill. Very talented writer :D
Hawk7886
7:48 pm | February 10, 2004
A good writer and an excellent Editor. . .
JJiggssaw
12:51 pm | February 10, 2004
A great story. I have been reading it the whole way and check the fan fic for a new chapter all the time. You're a great writer. Amazing things could happen if you teamed up with another good fan fic writer (Silent Hunter?).
CoLd BlooDed
12:22 pm | February 10, 2004
No problem Odin, I only have one more chapter to go and I hope you guys all read it.
teemus
12:04 pm | February 10, 2004
The Anonymous comment was me, i forgot to put my name in
teemus
12:04 pm | February 10, 2004
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SOS.Odin
12:00 pm | February 10, 2004
great job blood
and thanks for ur comment
excellent ending
MC's cousin
5:57 pm | February 9, 2004
Nice...but you know what? Just Nice.
Very good, even i'll admit, kept me reading. I like your prose and story line. Keep up the good work.

Signing Off


MCC
Anonymous
4:41 pm | February 9, 2004
"What are they doing?!" exclaimed 'Tanosalee as he watched the display.

"I told them to do it," 'Ralamee replied calmly,
=)

I like where this is going.
CoLd BlooDed
3:40 pm | February 9, 2004
Thanks Awacar, I'm glad you enjoyed it that much. :D

Only one more chapter to go...
Awacar
2:46 pm | February 9, 2004
I'm stunned by the ending, I really am.

Great story all the way, but the text under the last horizontal rule was great.


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